Wednesday, 27 January 2016

Script To Screen OGR UP TO DATE *Phill Feedback*

Script to Screen Ogr Up to Date

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  1. Good job, Aureo - that's a nice resolution of your components - and I like the idea of the girl being the key - I'm happy with that solution. I think, however, this being an animation, you need to think of some inventive ways by which the lighthouse keeper and the woman in the windmill communicate; not by bumping into each other - that's too prosaic - how about he communicates by using the light to signal out into the darkness - a message about his loneliness; the woman in the windmill receives the message, and replies by using the windmill - to perhaps blow her reply to him somehow? You need to make the very most of this idea of two people, separated, alone, but slowly drawing closer...

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