Shin the Isolated Lighthouse Keeper
Hi Aureo,I think your script is too long - or will it play too long on screen. One way to speed things up would be to take the brave move of getting rid of all dialogue. I think you can still achieve everything you set out to do - but it would be more poetic if you did it without all the chatting - which, at times, is a bit too modern-sounding, jarring with what essentially feels like a fable or a fairy story. What do you think?