You're alive, Aureo! Okay - just watch the length of time those BIG text elements hang about on screen for - right now, they're hanging about a bit too long. Also, I watched this, and I felt that I need a bit more explanation of the action I was seeing; you're giving me the big headings, but not describing the processes themselves. Are you having a voice-over? If not, you may need to think about ways of getting a bit more info on screen.